2 days ago It was a very terrible weather , My friend's name was allen he was my close friend but Mr.walker who was our teacher always punished me and allen cleaned the classroom . Allen was very angry in that day he was making an experiment called invisibility potion and finally he succeed it but the invisibility potion was the potion that made anything invincible in one dropped and it took 1 day to finished it than he went to my house and showed me the potion and told me his plan . Tomorrow everything was going like his plan than Mr.walker was very angry and he said if he know who did that to him he won't let them go away but the next step we already planned it .
That's a good work! I like that potion
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thank you teacher !!!
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