Tuesday is the day that my teacher used to collect home work from everyone of his student.
I was going to school with the awful home work paper cause my sister cousin drew & painted on my home work.
When it was my turn to give the home work to the teacher i took out my home work paper and showed to the teacher.
He said''what is this'' so i explained that my home work was drew & painted by my sister cousin when she came visited my house.
and that the day i made my teacher angry. He said''why did you let your cousin painted your paper like that ?'' i said '' i left it on the table and i went to the kitchen for lunch and maybe when she came near my paper she thought it for painting.I tried to tell the reason. He also said'' it is your responsible''.
Then he punished me for one week by let me did more home work than my classmate. i went home with the sad face.
Hi Seth, thanks for the post!
ReplyDeleteThis is a good story and you have told it well- I was happy to read it!
*When it my turn to give the home work...*
Better would be *When it was my turn to give the homework...*
And *Then he punish me for one week...*
This needs to be in the past, so *Then he punished me...*
Good work, let's see if you can write a few more words next time. :-)
Thank you teacher for your comment.I will try to do better next time.
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