Everyone in the world never have a knowledge when they born, so everyone need to go to school for get the knowledge, skill and experience. if we don't go to school how can we become a clever person and how can we help for our society to get stronger and stronger. ex:a prime minister of every country they can become prime minister because they went to the school that why they can become a prime minister and they think and exhausted their brain a lots how to development to country and how to control a country to have a good behavior.
So people's should go to school for study and a school is like a place that make us a get a good future, and it can makes a people to become to good person. and we don't go to school we won't have an ything and you will get a miserable life and if you become a stronger person, people in yours ociety will have a good opinion for you.
Some people think that they family rich already so need to go to school but it impossible because it not good like you have your ablity and your knowledge then you have money. and some people think that go to school is they can get their own ability and their knowledge.
very good post and good words!
ReplyDeletei agreed people should go to school.
ReplyDeleteHi vincent your post was very great so meaning full and you also had improved your writing alot.
ReplyDeleteHowever, it still have some little mis take and let's check together.
you wrote " So people's should go to school for study and a school is like a place that make us a get a good future, and it can makes a people to become to good person. and we don't go to school we won't have an ything and you will get a miserable life and if you become a stronger person, people in yours ociety will have a good opinion for you."
it should be" Therefore, people's should go to school for study and a school is like a place that make us a get a good future. Moreover, it can makes a people to become good person. If we don't go to school we wouldn't have anything and you would get a miserable life and if you become a stronger person, people in your society would have a good opinion to you."
Thank for reading. From Magaboy
vincent: thanks for your comments!
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