People around the world always have ability by their self. Some of people good at dancing, singing, playing sports, running, swimming, cooking....etc. Women is the person that always do a lot of housework such as: cooking, laundry, wash dishes.... But sometimes the man can do the cooking like the woman too.
Today I want to tell you about one man that want to be a chef when he get big. The man think about how he can cook the food well like the women. One day have one man want to be a chef in his future. He try to cook the foods for his self many times but he never cook the foods good and delicious like the woman. So he decide to go to the cooking school to study how to cook the food to make it look good and delicious.
In the morning he get up very early and go to the cooking school to study about cooking the food. At school he try to listen to the teacher that explain how to cook the food and look at the teacher cook the food very clearly. He try to cook the food for him self. When he had finished cooking he tasted the food and it was very delicious.
The teacher say that now he can cook the food good like the woman. He is very happy. He study cooking the food for six
months. And now is he exam day. He try to remember about the ingredients and he can cook the very delicious foods So he can pass the exam. He very happy.
When he go home he go to the supermarket very hurry and buy some ingredients. He try to cook the food that his teacher doesn't teach him by him self. But he cannot cook it so he go to the book shops and buy the cooking book to learn more at home. He open the book and he look at the instructions in the book. He follow the instructions in the books well and about one hours ago he can cook the very delicious foods that he want to cook.
He try to cook the food everyday and now he is a best man chef. He open a big restaurant and his restaurant is have a lot of people come everyday .Finally he can follow his dream because he always do all his best and he do it by himself. He very very happy in his life.
Hi Moniroth!
ReplyDeleteCan you cook? Your teacher can- I'm good at cooking! (do you believe me?)
This is a very good story and I enjoyed reading it very much. Good work with the paragraphs, too. Perfect.
Look here *When he cook already he taste the food that he cook and it very delicious.*
This would be better if you wrote *When he had finished cooking he tasted the food and it was very delicious.*
Well done, Moniroth!!