Hi every body:-) ! I'll tell you about one people that he like to play guitar very much . His name's Bill . Today he is only 18 years old . He study at one university in London . He is not good and not bad student in class just simple . But he is good at playing guitar . He have join one group in his school and his group name is Music POP , he is good at music too . Now I want to tell you when he was young .
When he is 3 year old his mother was died , he lived with his father and his grand mother but his grand mother like him very much because he is a good and smart boy . After his mother died his father has search for the new job in London . His job is taxi driver . He live in rent house . Sometime 1 month he came back home 2 times and sometime 1 month he came back home 1 time . But one day when Bill has 6 years old his father was died because of the accident . So Bill orphan boy . But he's not a poor boy because his grandmother took all of her money to made a restaurant . She sent bill to school . But Bill wanted to studied at Music school so his grandmother sent him to Music school . His music teacher like him very much because he is good at music.
When he is 15 years old he join one group name is Music POP . And his school have 3 groups of music but his group is the best group in school , his group has 1 gold medal too . All student in school like him very much . :-)
When he is 3 year old his mother was died , he lived with his father and his grand mother but his grand mother like him very much because he is a good and smart boy . After his mother died his father has search for the new job in London . His job is taxi driver . He live in rent house . Sometime 1 month he came back home 2 times and sometime 1 month he came back home 1 time . But one day when Bill has 6 years old his father was died because of the accident . So Bill orphan boy . But he's not a poor boy because his grandmother took all of her money to made a restaurant . She sent bill to school . But Bill wanted to studied at Music school so his grandmother sent him to Music school . His music teacher like him very much because he is good at music.
When he is 15 years old he join one group name is Music POP . And his school have 3 groups of music but his group is the best group in school , his group has 1 gold medal too . All student in school like him very much . :-)
Hi Leng.
ReplyDelete*He study at one university in London.*
Better would be *He studies at a university in London.*
*When he is 3 year old his mother was died*
This should be *When he was 3 years old his mother died.*
Good story. Keep up the good work!