Wednesday 27 July 2011

The Best Thing I Can Do


Prompt: What are some of the things you do well? Write about the thing that you are best at.

The Best thing I do well at home is make my whole family happy. This is a best thing I want to do because making whole family happy is also make my self happy. In order to make my family happy are First, I have to be a good student, a good son, or a good boy and always respect my family, who are older than me. Second, I must show them that I always study so that they appreciate that I am a good boy.

The best thing I do in school is study well to make my family and my teacher happy. Study is very important to me. In order to study well, the first thing that I must do is listen to my teacher's explanations and start to practice in class.. Second, Is to try my best to study at home and try to understand well.
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  1. Fabulous27 July 2011 at 17:44

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  2. Fabulous27 July 2011 at 17:47

    Yep! I love this post. Especailly you wrote ''This is a best thing I want to do because making whole family happy is also make my self happy.'' Pichny

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  3. Create a Country 227 July 2011 at 18:43

    Thank for your comment. CHORPOAN

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  4. Fabulous27 July 2011 at 19:17

    Oh! You're welcome.

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  5. The Invincible Dragons30 July 2011 at 15:19

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  6. The Invincible Dragons30 July 2011 at 15:21

    Hey, Chorpoan! :) It's a nice post here.
    But, I guess. There're some mistakes in there. You wrote:

    - "In order to make my family happy First, I must be a good boy and to be respected to my family. Second, I must show them that I always study and I was a good boy."

    It should be:
    - "In order to make my family happy are First, I have to be a good student, a good son, or a good boy and always respect my family, who are older than me. Second, I must show them that I always study so that they appreciate that I am a good boy." :)

    Hope you could change it in to my corrections. Thanks you.

    From: Samnang.

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  7. Create a Country 231 July 2011 at 09:51

    Thank you i will make a correction. CHORPOAN

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  8. The Invincible Dragons1 August 2011 at 07:52

    It's my pleasure. :)

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  9. Unknown1 August 2011 at 10:43

    Hi Chorpoan. Good post!

    Look at this *In order to study well the first thing I must listen to my teacher explain and start to practice in class*

    Better would be *In order to study well, the first thing that I must do is listen to my teacher's explanations and start to practice in class.*

    Keep up the good work.

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