If I had a time machine I would go to all places in the world. The first place that I go back in the past United state about 1939 to 1945 to see how American people live in world war 2. Moreover, I want to see how they produced weapon to use in world war 2 especially the Paramano- the bomb that killer 55 million people.
Than, I will go into the past 1000 years of China to see how people lived in the past and try their traditional food. In addition, I want to know about their culture in the past; now and in the future. Then, I will come back to tell my mother about it. Next I go in the past 35 years ,which is in Khmer route, to see how Khmer route people kill Khmer people. More than that I want to know the answer why people in Cambodia hate this route so much and don't want to have it again. Next i come back to now and tell my sister about this frighten route. Beside, the past I will go into the future 30 years to see how my life would be change good or bad. If my life will be change to be bad, I would change it from now and make it better. After that, I will go 100 years in the future to see how the world develop and came back to tell everyone to prepare for their future. Finally, I will use the time machine to get a very new invention in the future to use now to show people how the future will change by the new invention that they make.
Than, I will go into the past 1000 years of China to see how people lived in the past and try their traditional food. In addition, I want to know about their culture in the past; now and in the future. Then, I will come back to tell my mother about it. Next I go in the past 35 years ,which is in Khmer route, to see how Khmer route people kill Khmer people. More than that I want to know the answer why people in Cambodia hate this route so much and don't want to have it again. Next i come back to now and tell my sister about this frighten route. Beside, the past I will go into the future 30 years to see how my life would be change good or bad. If my life will be change to be bad, I would change it from now and make it better. After that, I will go 100 years in the future to see how the world develop and came back to tell everyone to prepare for their future. Finally, I will use the time machine to get a very new invention in the future to use now to show people how the future will change by the new invention that they make.
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ReplyDeleteLet's look at a couple of mistakes in your writing. You wrote: *If I had a time machine i would go to all place in the world.*
Better would be* If I had a time machine I would go to all the places in the world.*
*Than, I go into the past 1000 years of China to see how people lived in the past...*
Better would be *Then, I will go into the past...*
And: *Then, I come back to tell my mother about it.*
Better would be *Then, I will come back to tell my mother about it.*
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